Many style guides favor the active voice, which is more direct in that the subject of the sentence does something or is something. Some clients go as far as asking us to remove any instances of passive voice entirely, so it’s important to be able to recognise when you are looking at a passive construction and when you’re not.
The active voice looks like this: Subject + Verb + Object.
It places the emphasis on the subject and its action.
The passive voice is formed by:
It places the emphasis on the person/thing receiving the action – in effect making the object into the subject.
There are various reasons we might use passive voice.
(If I’m writing about the phone itself, passive might work. On the other hand, if my focus is the Apple company, active will be preferable—Apple released the iPhone in 2007.)
While there are certainly legitimate uses of the passive, we are often asked to minimize its use or remove it altogether, so identifying it is important.
Remember that voice is not connected to tense; the passive can occur in any tense:
So, to identify passive voice, you need to look out for the verb to be in any form followed by a past participle.
However, don’t be fooled! Sometimes things look like passive voice when they aren’t. Take a look at these examples:
These sentences are not passive voice. But why not? They all have a form of the verb to be, and they all have what appears to be a past participle.
Look more closely, however, and you’ll see that these are not past participles; they’re predicate adjectives (adjectives that modify or describe the subject of a sentence or clause and are linked to the subject by a linking verb – in the cases above, they are linked by the verb to be). Sometimes, predicate adjectives are in the same form as past participles, so be careful not to confuse them!
Here are a few extra things to help you identify passive voice:
1. Look for an action in the sentence – is something being done to someone/something?
(We have an action – giving a speech.)
(This is a state, not an action – we’ve got a predicate adjective here, not a passive voice sentence.)
2. There may be a ‘by’ phrase indicating who/what took the action.
3. Use zombies to fight passive voice. A handy tip for testing if a construction is passive is to add ‘by zombies’ at the end of the verb phrase. If the sentence still makes grammatical sense, then it may well be a passive construction (still be aware of predicate adjectives, though!)
4. Use the Hemingway App
5. Take our ‘Is it passive voice?’ quiz to get a bit more practice.
Let’s take an example:
So, you can simply put the subject at the start:
But what if the subject (the actor) isn’t explicitly mentioned?
Try to identify the subject from the context. If the previous sentence mentioned ‘manufacturers,’ for example, you could edit to:
Sometimes, though, it’s impossible to identify the subject, even from context. So, what do you do in these cases?
A simple hack is to make abstract nouns (the market, infrastructure bill, technology) the subject of the sentence.
For example:
Here, it’s impossible to know who precisely is allocating the money. So, you can simply make the abstract noun ‘the infrastructure bill’ the subject:
Or
You can eliminate passive sentences simply by using a stronger verb or getting rid of the helping verbs is, are, was, were, being.
Here, you could replace ‘is expected to’ with ‘may’ or ‘is likely to’:
This rule applies to the following phrases:
You should also eliminate helping verbs:
Some verb phrases containing ‘to be’ can be amended to noun phrases for a more active tone:
to be distributed >> for distribution
that need to be transported >> that will travel
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